Feedback needed

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  1. seicaratteri

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    Hi guys! Here's another track, in this one I focused more on the mixing and mastering part as I finished a course about it. I would love some feedback as always :) thank you so much!

     
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  3. KungPaoFist

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    I like but it sounds a bit compressed in my headphones, cool composition though:like:
     
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    It's kind of squashed and squished but yes, the composition is ok.
     
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    Nice song, what did you use?
     
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    This sounds like it was mixed on a gramophone, until it gets a proper EQ treatment there is no point in talking about anything else mix-wise. A lot of sounds are too in-your-face for my taste and I would lower the volume on those and add hefty amounts of reverb, the basic composition was not bad though and progressed quite well. A for effort.
     
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    Send me the wav file via pm.
     
  8. seicaratteri

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    Thanks for all the feedback guys! Extremely appreciated :) i'll go back to the mixing process and re do it from scratch
     
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    https://drive.google.com/open?id=1wLqNAY_ulM0-EuDPifEBwJswgbkm_SfN

    The song was futuristic, so i went with the "future" type of mastering,

    - Overall the song was fun to listen to, and i enjoyed working on it.
    - There was some problem with the mix and i tried fixing them at least until i got to a point where i was doing more harm than good, but here we are.
    - I added some reverb in the start and finish of the song to make it more interesting and fix the main lead synth "dry" problem.
    - I Could have worked on volume and automation but i decided not to, as that should be done in the mix rather in the master phase, at least in this case.

    Consider this my gift, for a song well done.
     
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    Well done MrLyannMusic.
     
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  11. G String

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    Wow, what a difference!

    It's quite inspiring to hear how much a track can be lifted by someone else.


    Nice tune too!
     
  12. javiawake

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    I like a lot¡¡ may be some themes on EQ and some times in the dynamics overall when down and rise the track and may be some more movement in the lead synth...tani......tani tini....tani dini.....tani daa.......a little of movement in the filter or pitch or something...
    But you have got a good track congrats¡¡¡¡
     
  13. Giggity

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    This track is missing a lot of mid-high end information for clarity, and depth. Luckily we started an educational series thread months ago which covers most of these. Just Search "Educational Series" to find out whether it is something useful for you.

    Additionally, @No Avenger is hosting the next series on Clarity coming up soon.

    Composition is kinda nice, actually, I enjoyed the flow.

    What DAW are you using?
     
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  14. seicaratteri

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    Wow that's quite a lift! Thank you so much, is truly inspiring :) I have to say that for my personal tastes there's too much reverb at the beginning, I wanted the arpeggio lead to be kinda dry in the intro. Anyway it's an incredible work, I'll come back to the track in a week or so with fresh ears and I'll start the mixing and mastering process again

    That's definitely interesting! I'll check them out :) where can I find them? in the forum?
    I'm using ableton :)
     
  15. Giggity

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    Yes.
     
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