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  1. Kran

    Kran Newbie

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    Hi guys ... I'm new here. I have found that people are pretty helpful here.
    Need feedback for this track



    Sounds overtly compressed? Not enough high end? Redo with cleaner Vocals? Remaster it?

    I have sorted out cleaner vocal recordings and mastering in my later tracks (this track was recorded in a untreated room about 5 meters from a busy highway)..
    Wanted to know what you feel is the most glaring/ basic fault with it.

    Thank you

     
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  3. spyfx

    spyfx Producer

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    hi Kran,thanks for posting,in my humble opinion try to bring down the delay on the vocals as a starting point.
    Keep up the good work :wink:
     
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    Thank you.. will check the flp.....
     
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    Hi there nice one for posting but in my humble opinion the vocals sound really terrible and are quite a bit out of tune\key.....They also are a bit loud and do not sit in the mix for me.....Not meaning to be nasty at all but you asked for an opinion and my own really, really bad :dunno:
    Before worrying about any mixing or mastering etc you need to completely re-work the vocal and sing on key as its really painful to listen.
    Its a little overly droney also and affected.....Again sorry as not meaning to be horrible at all & is just my own tiny opinion.
    Thanks for sharing & best of luck with the track :bow: :yes:
     
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    fraifikmushi Audiosexual

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    The problem are the vocals.
    The singer's abiltiy aside, here is what you can do production-wise: EQ the vocals (turn down the low mids), and fit them into the mix (turn them down). Less delay. Low-cut what goes into the delay.
     
  7. Kran

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    Thank you for your time and feedback... I think you all are right on spot. Will try to do that... And repost. That's why I like this site... Nice, usable , honest opinions... Thanks guys
     
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  9. Kran

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    Thanks lot for your time and ears "Kloud"... You are absolutely right... Will record the stuff again with your insights... I'm a full time MD (Dr) so don't get that much time... But correcting this is going to be my next project... Thanks again
     
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