Feedback about a Rock/Metal Track

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  1. MrLyannMusic

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    Hey every body hope every body is okey,

    well today i've made a Rock/Metal Track, when i say "Rock/Metal" it's because i don't know the actual genre :rofl: yes i'm serious,

    anyway this is not my genre, but i make other genre from time to time to gain more experience in the production world,

    enough talking this is the link :

    Soundcloud

    http://soundcloud.com/mrlyannmusic/zila

    click on what ever it suites you :) !

    please write what ever it comes in mind, thank you...

    PS : all sounds comes from Virtual instruments, no real ones were used in the making of this track, Daw : FL 11.

    :bow: :bow: :bow:
     
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  3. SillySausage

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    very nice, but I think you need to reduce the loudness a tad :mates: just used metallica as a ref and you are well above them :grooves:
     
  4. Demon

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    Maybe it would be a different result if you compared it to Lars' St Anger drums
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    Ok, now seriously...

    Nice track. If anything, I'd add more variations with the kicks. It doesn't sound like metal to me, sort of a hard rock thingymagig. Nice work! Even more impressive that it's all virtual.
     
  5. MrLyannMusic

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    @SirSillySausage Thank you for your feedback, well yeah you're right, the guitar's volume needs to be redcuced, and oh well i'm happy to be compared to a PRO group as metallica, well i just play with my virtual instruments tho :rofl: but that's great to have some good feedbacks,


    @Demon : Thank you, you too for your reply, i can't tell the diffrance actually but you're right i just listened to some metal kick, it's different, however if drums have power that's okey with me...

    and yeah i find it a challenge to make this kind of track sounds as real as possible !


    & Btw, i made a video & i was waiting for the upload to finish so i can put it in my reply,


    [media]https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=10203691323235777&l=6752798285316009879[/media]
     
  6. Demon

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    Hey, Mr Lyann Music.

    Mate, when I said variations, I didn't mean the sound of the kicks. These are up to you and only go by taste. What I means is for the kicks to do different patterns.

    So, for instance, at times, instead of going kick, kick, snare; kick, kick, snare. You cold mix them up a bit. Some double kicks and what not. An accent here and there, etc.

    I hope that makes sense, I'm on my third glass of wine here. hahaha.

    Good stuff man.
     
  7. MrLyannMusic

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    you mean change the drums patterns to avoid repetition ? & make it more dynamic ?
     
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    Yep, exactly. For instance the very start could have some mid-tempo double kicks or something like that. Mat, anything you want. The thing is, it sounds fine but, as you say, I'd make it a bit more dynamic, but it's up to you.

    Good luck with this man. Post whatever changes you make. Cool stuff!
     
  9. zero-frag

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    Too much limiting but other than that, pretty dope stuff :D
     
  10. vaiman

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    Cool stuff, good tune.

    I miss making rock/metal... all i do these days is produce electronic. Fun to do but not the same as banging out a riff on a guitar.
     
  11. MrLyannMusic

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    Thanks guys it means alot :)
     
  12. PatrickKn

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    Sounds really good. What did you use for instrumentation? Sounds quite real and well mixed. I could see someone singing over this for sure.
     
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