Here is another one with attempts to incorporate some of everyone's notes from the last one. Open for critiques!

 

Creative work once again & i like it ,thanks for sharing .
* * (Don't understand the "cuts" @2:03 &2:28)

 

Thank you for listening Spyfx! I always value your insight

They were a special request for editor. Thanks again!

 

plugins used?

 

really enjoy the powerful low end!

the mix is clearer now, too. I like the choir...
great stuff!

 

Thanks to the mix notes like the one you gave on the other

 

There is no song?

 

Empty???

 

KungPaoFist

 

Already applying improvements?

 

My apaologies.. I pulled it down and am still in the process of finishing..

Yes, this has been a work in progress for too long actually. I really need to have it finalized to move on to some other stuff as I'm very much out of time, the company it's for is wondering what my holdup is... Need to catchup on some stuff on the backburner also in order to generate fundage... Wish me luck