Every moment

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by paco909it, May 12, 2019.

  1. paco909it

    paco909it Noisemaker

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    Hi to everyone! I've just discovered this forum so I decided to let you hear my latest track :)
    It's an introspective chillout track, I hope you will enjoy it!

    Pasquale



     
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    No Avenger Moderator Staff Member

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    Sounds like a nice chillout track, though a bit dull here.

    But why only 30secs and force us to use Spotify app to listen to the whole track?

    Ah, and welcome to THE forum.
     
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    paco909it Noisemaker

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    You're right, sorry! This is the only way Spotify works (as I know) when you share a link!

    I've just added a Soundcloud link anyway :)
     
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    No Avenger Moderator Staff Member

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    Ah, that's better.

    My impressions: the bd is too loud and too boomy (probably somewhere from 100 - 200 Hz, maybe even higher) and lacks a bit kick sound, the whole track would benefit from some gentle high freqs and I would make the vocals delay/reverb a bit stereo.

    But on principle I like it.
     
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    paco909it Noisemaker

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    Hi @No Avenger , I've tried to listen to your suggestions. Here's the track after revisiting the mix, I'm sure you will like it a bit more :)
    Thank you for your tips! ;)

     
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    Yep, that sounds better to me, (mostly) subtle but decent.
     
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