error func (thats me) - kartenmeer - my new track for you

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  1. SaeureTrinker

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    hello to all!

    yes, its me again. i wish you all the best for 2018! :)

    now, im here to present you my new track called "kartenmeer".
    128 bpm... something melodic techno style...
    i really hope you enjoy.
    you can download it, if you want. but you dont have to, if you dont like it :)



    have a nice day!
     
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  3. Satai

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    Don't know what "kartenmeer" is, but it's great. Real strong offering here, all the well deserved congratulations are yours!

    Strictly for my taste, the mastering could be a little different and in particular not limit it quite as much, try to keep your max short-term loudness to around -9 LKFS at the lowest, that way it hopefully won't congest the lows as much. True peak was at almost +2db, which kinda guarantees Soundcloud and other mp3 encoders will mangle it during conversion. See if you like it better if you deliver it to the manglers with -1db true peak headroom, you might be surprised that it sounds better and fresher with less actual volume push.

    It's got such a PUSHED feel that it distracts from the awesome music at some points.
     
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  4. foster911

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    A real masterpiece! Thank you so much for sharing it with us.:bow:

    Everything is outstanding but my favorite part is around 3:30. Melody in that part is so catchy and spacy but is not lasting long. :yes:

    If you'd have a masterclass, me and deadmau5 are the first ones who would love to enrol in it. You know his music sucks like mine and maybe learn sth from you.:wink:

    BTW, did you make it in 15 min like me?:bleh:
     
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    hey sanchito aus Bern, nice once again, I do not hear it overcompressed, though we both know this music is compressed, but still sounds clean and true to the source, not a clipped audio chunk like some mainstream releases I have checked made in big $tudios and the sound is krass. I think there are one or two percussions that have that crunchy sound and gives the impression of clipping distortion. My ears say it sounds good on monitors. Now after checking the audio data by itself, what Satai says makes sense, so I would consider testing some of his ideas, and see if your music benefits. Guys in the thread, errorfunc makes also very nice psytrance tracks with a trance feel you should check them. I am of the idea he has material to be commercially released.
     
  6. Backtired

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    i checked scientific discovery and i think i agree with tony here: very, very nice stuff mate.
    @foster911 did you listen to Questo ritmo? you can only learn from guys such as this one :wink:

    he even has an acid trance track i'm listening to right now.
    Great inspiration Emiliano :wink:
     
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    @Backtired , acid is a guilty pleasure of mine - where's his acid tune at? :yes:
     
  8. Backtired

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    Hey mate,
    it was this track I was listening to

    still a lot of influence from modern stuff (I'm more for the 90s style for acid trax), but at its core it still has an acid line.
     
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  10. SaeureTrinker

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    @ satai: thank you very much for your helpfull advice! I appreciate that very much and i will try them out.

    @ foster911: not 15, but 10 minutes :) ... nono, i'm a really slow producer. every night a little bit :)

    @ herr tony: aaaah deutsch, schon besser. Ich quäle mich ab mit diesem Englisch :) ... es ist mir eine wahre Freude, wenn ich merke, dass meine Lieder anderen Leuten gefällt. Obwohl ich natürlich hauptsächlich zu meinem eigenen Vergnügen Musik mache, so ist es doch trotzdem schön zu wissen, dass man damit dem Einen oder Anderen eine Freude machen kann. Ich danke dir sehr fürs Anhören und das Hinweisen auf meine anderen Tracks :)

    @ backtired: back to english :) thank you very much for listening to my tracks. that means a lot to me! and yes, long live acid! :)

    ... ok, now its time to make some new music... :)
     
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    another fine track from you man, i think JOOP would be interested in signing your tracks !
     
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    ..da man of da builds..fantastic.work again..
     
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    what did you do within 15 minutes ?
     
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    mal ernsthaft: Ich würde Dich nicht in der Schweiz sondern eher in Israel verorten..rein vom Klang her. Apropos Israel, um den Kreis zu schließen: "Infected Mushroom" sind aus Israel und, wie kaum überraschend, ursprünglich psy-trancer.... Die machen mittlerweile zumindest auch Hybrid Trap...und zwar vom Allerfeinsten. Gib' was her in der Richtung und ich kann Dir 6,8%:) von 350.000 Abonnenten an views auf YT innerhalb von 24 Stunden garantieren..als Einzeluplolad...innerhalb eines Mixes etwa das 5-fache. Klingt blöd, entspricht aber ziemlich genau der Wahrheit und ist absolut ernst gemeint. Abgesehen von mir solltest Du aber echt Leute auf YT suchen, die genau Deine Musik erfolgreich veröffentlichen. Soundcloud ist ok aber YT ist das Maß der Dinge. Und Deine Musik ist für mich absolut outstanding.......vor allem verglichen mit dem Zeug, das man üblicherweise hier so hört. Wundert mich echt, dass Du das hier postest.
     
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    Do you know why my music always sucks? Because I just listen to my own music and see other ones as distractions.:bleh:
     
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    I'm working on a genre called "fast music" (making music in 15 minutes). I've made it by myself and will popularize it in the world soon or later sth like a blockbuster. @Backtired is one of its adoring fans. Ask him the exact details.:lmao:
     
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    not often i listen to a track that long from start to finish.
    i give it 10/10

    MORE PLEASE
     
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  18. SaeureTrinker

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    Hey gwydion!

    Also erstmal danke für die Blumen :bow:
    Und natürlich auch danke für dein Angebot und Ratschlag! :wink:
    Allerdings bin ich momentan mit der gesamten Situation ziemlich zufrieden, so dass ich vorerst weiterhin meine Lieder zum Nulltarif anbiete. :) Natürlich hätte ich nichts dagegen, wenn ich mehr Leute erreichen könnte. Aber ich bin Prormomässig echt ne Niete :rofl:
    Ich konzentriere mich hauptsächlich auf die Musik. Der Rest ergibt sich schon. Kommt Zeit kommt Rat, nicht wahr? :yes:
     
  19. spyfx

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    @SaeureTrinker i've just listened to this track again,it is super & very well done,thank you for sharing my friend :wink: :bow:
    it is 11/10 for me ! :keys::keys::keys: :like:
     
  20. mozee

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    Great work man.

    Beautifully done.

    :thanks:

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