Remix for a competition, let me know what you think ^ http://soundcloud.com/eklypse-1/electrode-astrio-octanis
:D SO SIICKK!!! Sooo Dooope Fucking sickkk!!!!! I hate that Electrode, spammy wanker. I had to mute him because the above comments were all I saw everyday on my dashboard. Ill listen tomorrow for you mate and give you non-Electrode feedback then Its late here so cant listen at an appropriate volume.
0:14 nice little fill The extra percussion,white noise and reverb are great little touches. Love the almost sterile sounding bass. Is it Katy Perry vocals? 2:02 doesnt quite fit in my opinion. Excluding 2:27 which is a great lead-in with the bass, you should make a bigger deal with the transitions into each section. 5:09 the fx'd vocal of this with the bass and driving drums (not stop start like the outro) would make a great chorus or post chorus. Overall the arrangement is a bit iffy. The whole track isnt very "defined". It changes too much without really shifting up into the next gear. You have all you need to make a great track but they aren't laid out the best in my opinion. You could probably cut almost a minute off it in track length. Export the different elements as loops and open a new project, move things around and switch up the arrangement to see what works.