All tracks produced by me with help and use of ccmixter samples over the period of last 4 months.

http://www.mixcloud.com/Doxent/doxent-zsigmond-dream-of-flight/

all separate tracks on my ccmixter profile http://ccmixter.org/people/doxent

 

i think its nice! experiment with some vocal chains to put a nice blend on those vocals. mixing vocals is not a easy thing to jump off into. because every vocalist has a different tone. try this order one of my secrets Eq,Reverb,Compression! Song sounds like something on a movie scene! nice to hear something with vocals on it and with someone singing! try backing backing vocals in different octaves to support leads especially on areas of emphasis. something simple but constantly overlooked.

 

Eq, reverb, compression that's what I use too though each pella and voice requires different individual setting.

 

I agree with hoodhendrix that some back ups would really help reinforce the vocal melody in certain areas.

There are a couple of notes that are off pitch as well that might sound smoother if you correct with Melodyne ..etc Usually coming off of a high note or the high note itself.

Nice Ballad Doxent Zsigmond.