Better focus on your edm style, sounds better; maybe compose some orchestral or "chill" edm hybrids.

 

I feel like you're involved in that space already but if not, definitely on the right track!

 

I actually asked the wrong question. I didn`t mean exactly this composition, but in general. Like do a regualar guy, with his own bedroom studio can achieve these things, or the market is oversaturated and there is no place for newcomers. Yeah, I know, that quality of my stuff is not even close to Hanz Zimmer`s, but hey, Its my first succesful attempt to make really finished orchestral song

About the drums, everything is samples from libraries. Drums are Metropolis Arc 4



P.S and there is a really bothering me thing. When I try to make orchestral compositions I almost always, end up with something similiar to Pirates of the Carribian and Dragonborn. (I really love those songs and listen to them every day) This is the first time it sounds different.
Is it okay, that almost all my tracks will be inspired by these 2 or its plagiarism?

 

the only thing the market is over-saturated with is people all doing the same thing

the only risk of being original and different would be to be isolated from the crowd for a while... which is not very different than being one amongst many.
chose wisely

I've read a comment who says they liked your electronic stuff, I didn't have time to listen to it, but maybe to incorporate orchestral in it is the way ( your way ? )

the answer of your P.S is contained in the question : listen to different styles. orchestral was there for centuries.