hey guys i don't usually put band stuff up on here but i wanted some feed back, this is just a demo, not mixed or anything, so im aware

i just want to know what your over all thoughts are on the composition of the song. thanks! NOT FINISHED BTW!


http://soundcloud.com/robbie-parker_iv/ff1

 

I liked it.All of it. Only thing at all I'd change is way it ends.And I think you may want it a lil longer too.2:45 is pretty short.

Not sure if it's supposed to be structured a certain way or not,I just gave a quick listen.
Sometimes I try certain lil orders of arrangement like
intro,verse,chorus,verse,chorus,bridge/solo(or another verse)then end it with a chorus or have an outro after the last chorus,etc.

I experiment with other orders too,and have heard other songs do different orders of those as well.

I'm not sure I can critique this.It sounds awesome to me.Whole thing. *yes*
Just needs some sort of stop or fade out or something at the end.In my opinion.


Great job overall!

Rock on Robbie!

 

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I also think it ends too abruptly, but I am guessing this is just a taste of the whole thing?

Good stuff, mate.

 

Thanks guys, means a lot to get such good feed back...and yeah it's not finish that's why it ends like that

 

Well, make sure you share the finished product, man! Always glad to find another metalhead here!!

 

Will do \m/