My attempt to make cool deep house tune. This is what I am working on right now.
Also, comment, criticize, etc, I hope it will be helpful, because I am somehow
stuck with no idea what to do next in this track.

http://soundcloud.com/tune-in-1/deephouse

http://k004.kiwi6.com/hotlink/0nokg3q55b/deephouse.mp3

 

I think that it could do with a good sub type bass line coming in after 16 bars or so and then maybe some ambient strings/pads or something to give it that deep sound.

 

Keep it deep, calm those hats down a bit, and watch your kicks subs, my monitors were shaking, you got them tooo subby! Ease up on the low freqs a bit, like 120 and down, maybe -4db or so. Don't bring everything in at once, leave it airy, atmospheric, remember you're searching for the deepness!

Edit screw what i said about the subs, my subwoofer was on and I didnt realize it, its not configured yet, so it tends to be much louder and its 2 in the morning here!

 

Snares are way too loud and harsh for what I expect from Deep House.

Try going for tight, short claps maybe?