Dark Electronic pop song. Let me know what you think!

Discussion in 'Electronic' started by Floris, Jan 21, 2024.

  1. Floris

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    Hey guys!
    Here´s a song I made some time ago. Don´t really know how to describe it, but let me now your thought!

     
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  3. Bassifondi

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    Bravo, the ending sort faded out . that could be developed more. I like it.
     
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    nice. I definitely get the moody feeling in you mix and nice vocals.
     
  5. jennyblack

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    Very nice!!! Who is in the vocals?
     
  6. Floris

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    Thanks! Yes, I still need to work on an appropriate ending
     
  7. Floris

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    Thanks very much!
     
  8. Floris

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    It´s Natalie Major from Sounbetter. I love her!
     
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    it's nice. the vocal is good and I like the one pad towards the end. Is that synth patch called a Lute? That one, is nice. The post about it ending aburptly is one I agree with. Nice work anyway.
     
  10. Satai

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    It's really cool!

    When listening I personally felt the vocal appears way too abruptly in the intro part, you don't get much time or material to get into the mood for hearing her quite yet, and bam she's there already and quite "naked" without breathing slapback delay or anything to make her vocals the big fat star of the show that all the rest of the elements bow down to and serve.

    And they're really good elements, musicially & emotionally they were hitting just right, so you've got to work more on it if you get the chance, to get a better fit! kinda getting the whole mix working together to serve one singleminded purpose vs. being a stack of different things that you can tell "ok that's the backing track, ok that's the vocal now" - the feel should be more like "woah, it's alive, it's taking me away!"

     
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