A couple more works in progress..by myself and my 'band'... One Reason.

Opinions appreciated.

Dreadlock Vanity

Sister Sister

Thanks Guys.. :dancing:

 

Hello there, here is my feedback

Dreadlock Vanity:
The intro is nice, got a nice buildup - with tension and then boom the first verse kicks in
You've managed to pick good instruments to give the song a nice background with lots of body and soul.
When it comes to mixing and EQ, I'd personally like to have a bit of a clarity in the midrange and around 90-130.
It sounds nice however the snare could need some work. Like a little bit of punch(comporessor+eq), and just a little brush of reverb.
Same with the kickdrum it needs clarity. The base sounds cool. Perhaps lower the strings just a bit so it won't point out over the vocals.
I really like the song, the lyrics are good. Keep up the good work bro

Sister Sister:
Masterpiece! This song is awesome. The piano and reversed background sounds, plick and pluck give the song one heck of a nice feeling!
Same with the base, drums - feeling good!
The vocals feel great too.
So yep this song is super. Again some work on the mixings and this babe is ready!

If you need more feedback, let me know okay ;)
Have a nice one!
/Xiny6581

 

Thanks bro, nice words, I appreciate that.

 

nice lovely songs man

couldnt comment more on mixing...im still new on this stuff and still studying mastering heheh..


why did you call the 1st song dreadlock vanity ??

 

Thanks, really none of the mixing has been done yet , so thats ok... The name was the first thing that popped into my head when i saved the initial Live set... should probably change it, song names can be such a bitch...

Preciate it *yes*

 

i just kinda feel guilty... its because i wear locks..im suddenly thinking ..oh no im vain ..X_x
hahaha..


you got the rhythm within you brother..
keep it up ^_^