Could someone help me correcting a song lyrics?

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  1. Adamdog

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    Hello and thank you in advance, I've written some new lyrics but I'm not an English speaker so I'd need some advice and correction. That's a very simple song: verse 1, chorus 1, verse 2 (all other choruses have same words as chorus 1). Thank you.
     
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    PM them to me an I'll try to help.
     
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    ah cool thank you
     
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