Contructive Critisism On New Track

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by Willie.F., Dec 6, 2011.

  1. Willie.F.

    Willie.F. Newbie

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    Please check out the new track here

    http://soundcloud.com/djwillief/willie-f-i-s-love-written-in

    Thanks!
     
    Willie.F., Dec 6, 2011
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  3. Alexander

    Alexander Newbie

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    I'm from Gholland, ishn't that vierd?
    The guitar sounds quite awful. If it has to be guitar, use a steel-string, with nice clear high and little to no low end.
    I miss a bass instrument.
    The strings sound a bit corny.

    Nice vibe.
     
    Alexander, Dec 6, 2011
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  4. YordiDreams

    YordiDreams Newbie

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    I really digg your song! Really nice vibe. Keep'm coming. Please.
     
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  5. Kookaboo

    Kookaboo Rock Star

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    Not bad mixed!
    My critics:
    – try to use a de-esser in the vox tracks!
    – the guitar sounds weak, without dynamic
    – the drum sounds don't really fit [to my ears...]
    – Voice is o.k. :wink:
     
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  6. Davey Jones

    Davey Jones Producer

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    Sounds like Real Guitar was used. The strings were unreal. Try a different string with a slower attack and wider sound. The song isn't too bad, though. More of a mixing issue.
     
    Davey Jones, Dec 6, 2011
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