What's up with all the doubt lately?

 

I think my ears just committed suicide. I need a paramedic. Lol. Not sure if my cat just died out in the other room by sharting so forcefully that he blasted off through the window and into outer space like a rocket, or if I it was just my computer raping me in the ears with an invisible penis.
Sorry, you asked me to be ruthless. So I'm just fulfilling that request.
This is now on my play history. How could you do this to me?
I would say add drums, tune the thing a little better, and then there's a fader on the master track that says "Gain" - turn that thing downward to about -150 dB (negative one-hundred fifty decibels).
That aside, your other tracks are substantially better than this.
I can fix this song for you, but I'm gonna need a young priest, and old priest, Pope Francis, and a ouija board to communicate with Pope John Paul II.

 

to less harmony for my taste

 

it's ok, not bad in fact.. not all has to sound like a "normal" song... and not everything needs to be loved..
art is what it is.. you do it for you not for others.. so what other's think it does not matters.. AT ALL..
leave it like that work on other track.. sounds good.

 

who gave me this idea ? >>

 

I guess I'm just getting old as I just don't get this style of music. To my taste it would be great if you added a drum track, a couple guitar tracks, bass guitar track, piano track...vocal including harmony parts. Then remove the parts you have and of course...more cowbell!

In all seriousness, if this is your style that's great...keep at it. Listen to (and compare) lots of reference material in the genre. Good luck my friend

 

think it's better at 3.32