any feedback on my song?

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  1. Reza

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    it is a song that i created and it has some santoor and sitar combination, any feedback from u guys?
     
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  3. mrpsanter

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    Nice tune, I like it.
     
  4. Cackwizard

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    I like it too!
     
  5. peterA

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    Nice mellow track. Not sure why the kick changes rhythm in a few places.
     
  6. T3NR@

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    I like the idea part of it, really good sound design elements and rythm. However the mix is a mess, really over compressed on the master bus, very harsh high-end and lower frequencies sound like they are playing through a pipe or something else narrow. Mix in mono, always, when it sounds good in mono it is almost impossible to sound bad on stereo. Keep working on it, there's potential there.
     
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  7. Reza

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    tnx
     
  8. Reza

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    tnx dude
     
  9. Reza

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    i had to change it since i had to fulfill the time
     
  10. Reza

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    tnx for ur feedback dude and tbh the problem that i have is not software related its about the sound hardware that i dont have i mean i cant properly hear what i make...
     
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    Nice track... Good zone

    As has already been mentioned... Mix is a little harsh and a scattered low end... If you dont have good monitoring perhaps youd like to try mixing it on decent headphones?

    Just my personal opinion...

    Good work... :like:
     
  12. stoiximan

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    Very good it somehow reminds me of Greece
     
  13. Reza

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    tnx dude
     
  14. Reza

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    tnx
     
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    Intro reminds me of this gem :



    Nice track ! Maybe try to re-mix it, some users have already pointed out some things to consider. Keep on producing !!

    Cheers.
     
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    I dig it. Agree with above. Elements are interesting, rhythm is solid. Remix.
     
  17. Reza

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    tnx for sending dis, i agree it has some similarities i wasn't aware of it
     
  18. Reza

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    tnx dude
     
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