Another track feedback please :)

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  1. seicaratteri

    seicaratteri Kapellmeister

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    Hello all guys again! I finished another track, with this one I tried something a bit different, and I would appreciate any kind of feedback :)



    One question: how do you perceive the vocals if you don't understand italian? I think this is very interesting

    Thanks a lot in advance for taking the time to listen to it! I truly appreciate it! :)
     
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  3. badepapa

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    Liked the vocals in the Intro section
    Overall good effort! :wink:
     
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    Cool relaxing vibe! It's a very effective platform for that narrative dialogue. Really makes me want to know what he is saying. This track needs subtitles.

    Cheers!
     
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  5. seicaratteri

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    Thanks a lot! I really appreciate your comment and the time you took to listen to my track :)

    Thank you very much as well! Again, I really appreciate it! The vocals come from a theatrical read of the bible :) and now that I think of it is very interesting because the vocals are in my vocal language and I do understand them, but how do they sound for you if you don't know Italian?
     
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    sounds like italian but he talks slow and its sound monumental ......i dont understand a word
    in second part where he speaks its more common impression of italian to me...the first part has bit a sort of another vibe
     
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    Good one. Nice drive and atmosphere.

    Mixwise I'd lower the open HH a tiny bit, raise the bass also a tiny bit and maybe try a ping pong delay or a mid-long reverb with an audible predelay on the main synth. But these are probably all a matter of taste.

    From my school Latin I could get some single words with religious content, but of course not the complete meaning.
     
  8. seicaratteri

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    Super interesting! And in general do you like how the voice sounds? :)

    And thank you very much for the feedback I really appreciate it! Regarding the delay and reverb on the main synth is a thing that I have noticed as well, I will worked on it. Thanks again a lot :)
     
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    Soundtrak to the 'Italian version of The Purge'???

    Intersesting trk Mate!
     
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    its great yeah...
     
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    Ahahah could actually work! Thanks a lot :)

    Good to know! Thanks a lot for your feedback :)
     
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    Sounds good. The Italian speaking voice is great (i don't understand it though).
     
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    Greetings!

    I quite like the intro! the composition is quite nice, the FX are also interesting.

    On the other hand ... the mix is not so good:

    The kick sounds hollow! I personally don't like it.
    Much mid / side EQ is missing, sounds are either too centered or too far away. Think of a three-dimensional semi-sphere, there you must place the instruments. But be very careful because excessive panning is not the solution, it will only make it worse.
    The voice urgently needs widening.
    There is excess compression in the main instruments, they do not breathe enough.

    In general it is nice.

    Congratulations. :)
     
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  14. seicaratteri

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    Thanks a lot! Appreciate it :)

    And thank you very much for the feedback on the mix I truly appreciate it! I listened it back paying attention to what you said and it is true that the mix needs much more work. I was working on this track on another computer that I don't own anymore and I did quick and dirt but the result is not so good. I will get back to work on it :)

    Thank you again!
     
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