Another Rock Song

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by DimChandeliers, Apr 20, 2012.

  1. DimChandeliers

    DimChandeliers Ultrasonic

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    Guitar / bass/ drums

    No vocals ... yet.


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  3. One Reason

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    Sounds quite Tom Petty'ish.... you don't have his guitars do you? :rofl:

    Nice job, bass notes felt a little late in a spot or two..

    Call us when you have some vocals on it.. :wink:
     
  4. ric_bm

    ric_bm Newbie

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    I like the style! but I also feel there are some consistency issues between the elements of your track.

    Keep working on it, add some vocals and I'm sure you'll be back here with a really nice tune. Best of Luck!
     
  5. Jessycd

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    I thank you just because it's rock ! lol I'm so tired of hearing electronic stuff everywhere...

    Thank you very much ! :mates:

    That track is cool but the vocals are really important in that kind of music... So... It's hard to say it's good or it's bad ! But it's potentially good for sure ;)

    Thanks again, really ! lol
     
  6. lampwiikk

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    Reminds me of Wilco...

    http://youtu.be/2Jzum2jvLwA
     
  7. Zenarcist

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    I'd agree with this. I wouldn't criticize your playing, as you are a much better guitar player than I am. Maybe revisit a few of the compositional elements. To my ear there are only one or two that are possibly out of sync.
     
  8. gsoun

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    i completly agree with jessycd, thank you for actually playing instruments...

    as for the song, great riff. reminds me of a band called Green, the feel of it. i'd say you got something good if you spiced up the intro, although i like how it goes into the main riff, maybe shorten it in half. and put a proper bridge in there instead of the breakdown at the 2:17 or so mark, as it it gets repetitive.

    keep on it though, as "you might have something here"
     
  9. DimChandeliers

    DimChandeliers Ultrasonic

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    Thanks mates!

    I did copy and paste a couple of parts. I'll have to go back and fine-tune their placement.

    Some of the drum parts have a different reverb setting too. I'll have to fix those.

    Who's up for doing the vocals when I finish the lyrics and put a demo track down?

    I can't sing for sh*t.

    PS One Reason - I didn't realize it, but you're right about the Tom Petty sound.
     
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