started with a LABS test run and ended up as dnb song.
Hope you like it!
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/b8vaRcFtpCiPEYBNA

 

"Hope you like it!"

no.

 

not bad but also not great
but also way to chill for me

 

reality _Thanks for listening though..

 

I'm listening a second time so it is not bad.

I will say this of first impression. it sounds like you are not done with it. I don't hear anything wrong with individual elements.
I have two "problems" with it so far. the first is that it's not done, in a few directions. firstly; because this was what I was immediately about to mention as a negative comment. The link I got was to Labsrat. Listen to the difference between the first 8 bars and then Point Blank. Something is clearly different between them, so it's not mixed or something. the stuff you want people listening for, probably can't be heard because of the mix or the export or the Soundcloud conversion. idk.

both of them seem to be "quieter" than most Soundcloud files. what daw is this from?

and then the usual thing. it needs more changes to keep someone interested. especially with more atmospheric type sounds and pads like you are using, it's like taking an ambien at a club.