Hello again,

Please (Please!) let me know what you think of this... -

http://soundcloud.com/7stripes/seven-stripes-all-night-long


God knows why it gets exported so low on volume when in the DAW it's pumping hard...anyway - feedbacks?

Thanks!
Se7en

 

Cool progressive jam. Loved the build to the main drop.Very nice lead melody. Piano really sets it off for me down the stretch!

But, after the drop, the kick got softer along with the rest of the lowend. It really lacks lowend during the main riff. The kick is so thick/thumpy during the build it shows up the main riff/bridge. Maybe you could switch out the two kicks? And a cool bass on the on the main riff would def help round out the absent lowend durring the main riff. And as always, if you're having trouble fitting a fat kick into the main riff, you can chain your pads and leads to it to make sure the kick and the snare stand out alot more.

Intense melodic jam. Lookin foward to more from ya.

 

Hi gerald,
Thanks for the input.
This is supposed to be layered with vocals.
So, a lot can't going on musically so it won't overtop the song itself. (Taking Calvin Harris for example, with flat thin chorus)
I'll look into the chorus again.

Thank you and hope you'll like the rest.