A song for a little movie im planning to do

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  1. Nogale

    Nogale Noisemaker

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    Well,this is my first time arround here,and i just wanted to share all of you guys a song for a movie im planning to do (as said in the title)

    and i just wanted to ask if y'all like it



    tell me your opinion and how could i improve,and,if you wish,check my other songs

    babay.
     
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  3. metaller

    metaller Platinum Record

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    Good job, like it! :wink:
    Regarding mixing, bass and low frequency are a little high for me, and the rhythm guitar can be doubled and panned hard right and left to give space to the melody.
     
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    Welcome, Nogale!

    Like your work :wink: ..clever use of the line under the guitar with the leading tone that never lands on the tonic. Keeps up the suspense. You also made sure that the guitar theme doesn't get boring, by adding and subtracting other elements.

    ..maybe a thing to consider - IMO the "relax" part 2:00-3:30 could be longer.

    Can't wait to see the movie. I hope you will post it here! :yes:
     
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    Feels like it will be a Dark related movie.. :)
     
  6. Kinghtsurfer

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    A lovely, engaging piece...nicely produced too! Good work! :like:
     
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    Hello, Spanish guitar fits nicely with this strange pad, climatic song, like it :guitarhero:
     
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