A melody made by me, feedback please

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  1. sholay75

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    A track I made please give feedback


     
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    Hi @sholay75, your song stands out from the mass taste, a very unique theme, which unfolds its somber effect.
    It's a bit monotone, maybe a video would do the song good.
    You could also reinkopieren 2 breaks and fill with something else, just an idea.
    Overall well done - I like it. But is expandable. Stay tuned.
     
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    Yes it need an intro and interludes
     
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    Wind or storm sounds do very well for starters (15 seconds of wind). But it's your song, so it's just an idea.
     
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    yes it can increase the sense of desolation
     
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