A deep electronic track I produced recently. I hope you enjoy it!

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by Arun (Deepstate808), Nov 16, 2018.

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    Arun (Deepstate808) Member

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    Hey fellow music producers. Feel free to check out my new track and please leave me some feedback. :disco:

    Arun - Elixir (Original Mix)
    Samples taken from Movies Batman & Lucy.

     
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    @Arun (Deepstate808) Elixir is one of the best tracks I have heard in a long time. Nothing else but thanks for sharing it needs to be said!

    Deepstate808? Inspired by 808 State?
     
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    Elixir is awesome man... Love it! Brilliant work!

    Not gonna stop is also great!

    Good show!!! :like:
     
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    im def swinging....the intro on not gona stop swinging is phenomenal....how u use vox on both is so good...
    but without or less the upfront lead or sometimes 2.bassline maybe, it would burn much more imho...very good groove you have there and bass is coming around on laptop speakers..but youre tracks awesome groove got overlayerd by youre upfront pleayed lead...less lead more tracks groove

    very good work ..i wish i was there allready..
     
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    I laughed when the oriental instrument took the place, i didn't expected it.
    Elixir, great track for car driving, thanks for sharing !
     
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    This first piece called Elixir is really good to my ears.
    Very well done
    This reminds me the rhythm section of Nils Petter Molvaer (Steamer era)
     
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    hey guys thx a lot for the feedback. i take it positive. great some of u like it and even laughed. thats what it all about right? if some of u enjoyed it, it was worth the time spent creating it. i will work a bit on the details and the finetuning...
    and yea ur right agent007 the name deep state 808 has more meaning to it... i think its obvious. cheeerz :winker:
     
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    Well not for me, but I'm not an agent. :winker:

    And again: Elixir is a great work :bow:
     
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    Good stuff, nicely produced.
     
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    Good concept, works quite well with the vocals. However, it's probably a bit too long and not enough variation in the structure of the track, gets a bit lost halfway through. I'd play about with some of the vocals, change the pitch on some words like they did in the 80s and have some kind of vocal hook, also that indian part towards the end, I'd develop that a bit more to break up the track, maybe get a bit more grit and variation behind the bass and change that snare sound as its too soft. Bit more work and you got something quite nice there.
     
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    here a lil update from the elixir track. thx for ur feedback. :bow:

     
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