my man. In retrospect actually wish i'd done some things in the arrangement a bit differently to provide more of a sense of tension leading into the hook but what can you do. I made an agreement with myself to just finish things and upload them instead of doting on all the little details that can be improved.

much appreciated

 

One way to make it less thin on smaller speakers is to double the bass line an octave apart. Take the bass line you are using and put the same bass line one octave higher. You might have to adjust the volume on a note by note basis, but that is an easy and cheap trick to use.