A beautiful, subtle piece i titled: "lol, kys"

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  1. Cav Emp

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    Niiice!: "And me ... no Jeffrey Epstein...." :like: Thanks for sharing your music with us bro!
     
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    Wow, your wordplay leaves me speachless... This is an AS top 5 for me:like::like:

    Can you redo this and include some stuff about money and bitches though? I think it would take it to another level
     
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    I'll be sure to include it in the next one :rofl:

    thanks for the kind words man
     
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    fuuuuuck man you seriously have improved your lyrics and overall mix etc. This shit goes off...

    If I had a rap label honestly I'd sign you in a second not even fucking around... better than most popular rap out there so ytf not?

    Keep it up and remember, keep on the grind (only way were gnna go further)
     
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    Fuck Macgregor, Cav Emp is the true CHAMPION! Take 'em all down, Bro.

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    Love it dude! Not usually my bag but this is awesome.
    My neighbours have also been listening to it 3 times. They too love it, and even bang on the wall with excitement.
     
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    You earned a new follower :) Good track keep it up
     
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    The rap vocals are defo the best part in this song and really good. I like 'em.

    They could sit better in the mix though. Due to the low sn and claps the whole song looses a bit emphasis and punch.
     
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    Madman slaying them all with ill lyrics left and right !!
     
  12. Cav Emp

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    lol yeah. My tendency is actually to turn the drums up way too loud. Sometimes I compensate by turning them down from what I think would be an appropriate level. Guess I went too far. Appreciate your honesty, and your ear.


    Also thanks everyone for listening, and for the kind words. I'd respond to you all individually but that seems a bit self indulgent lol. Know that I appreciate it. Not always easy to get people to listen to a song when they don't know if it'll be any good, but you guys are very generous with your time :)
     
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    There's a pretty easy way to get this balance better. Just turn down the volume until the song is hardly audible anymore. Neither the snare nor vocs should vanish.
     
  14. Cav Emp

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    Thats a great tip thanks
     
  15. Apex Mors Cordis

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    Hey Caveat Emptor

    amazing track. Your vocals ... Man, I love it! Awesome. Would like to team up with you for a track, really! :mates:

    Soundwise ... I needs more bass ... just kidding :rofl:!

    But on small speakers ... it really sounds thin ... so perhaps a bit saturation on the bass (808s or what these are). Additionally all other elements (snare ... claps .. rest) needs to be more hearable (small and big speakers). They sink a little bit in the mix. Mix is not really balanced.

    Your voice is awesome ... :like::like::like:

    Best
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    i think needs a bit mastering maybe. otherwise it's good man. loved your voice. i didn't knew you a rapper.
     
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    when you change flow at around 2:28-2:30 that's the flow switch success :) keep doing great.
     
  18. Cav Emp

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    Thanks man. I'm way behind on a few projects with a friend at the moment. If you want to stay in touch though, I certainly wouldn't mind seeing if we can make something work once I've caught up on some things I need to finish up :)

    True, it kind of sounds shitty on small speakers. I struggled a lot with the room reverb too. Had a really hard time striking a balance between how it sounds on monitors/high quality headphones vs laptop/phone speakers. Almost inaudible on good speakers (which is what I wanted), but way too prominent on laptop speakers.

    I'm still learning :)
    I do a few things quite well and other things sometimes get flubbed in service of other details I was focused on.
     
  19. Apex Mors Cordis

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    Did drop a PM to ya via SC ... have also a lot in the pipeline at the moment ...
     
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    This is fire! Stellar production, loving the bass too
     
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    that hook is groovin sick , dude
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