The Chainsmokers - Kanye Ft. SirenXX (H. Soares Remix) FEED4FEED

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  1. helder777

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    What's up everyone! o/

    Today I'm bringing a remix of a song that I like a lot!

    I have put a lot of effort on this one, so I hope you guys enjoy it, and as always give me some nice feedback about what could be improved or where I'm going wrong.

    And if you want feedback, give me some, that way everyone stays happy on this forum :)

    Thanks!

    http://soundcloud.com/helder-soares/the-chainsmokers-kanye-ft-sirenxx-h-soares-remix
     
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  3. thantrax

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    Not bad at all. But...

    1) synth sound is too thin, like in Casio keyboard for childs (0:35 -> 1:04)
    2) snare are weaks (hipass filter?)
    3) (dance) piano need more colour (...I am piano addicted)

    P.S.
    Remember this...before I pass to your track I was listening to the last LAMB
    cd (double CD for fans only...so everything sounds flawed)
     
  4. helder777

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    Yeah I really don't like the high end of sylenth but don't know how to fix it. Never see this casio stuff so i don't know about that.

    Yeah the snare drop is supposed to be weak, just to give a flavor, and the snare roll i judge that he does't needed to be strong, cause there was other stuff building up together, but honestly i was lazy to mix him up hahaha.

    I did't did almost anything with the piano, just put some more brightness on him, cause i find he's pretty by himself, but you know, i'm not a piano expert or something.

    What is LAMB? This? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lamb_%28band%29
    Never heard about this guys. Tell me a cool song about them so i can't check it out!

    Anyway, thanks for the feedback thantrax, I appreciate it a lot man!
     
  5. thantrax

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    Yes, they are. I sugget you to listen to:



    I love Lou (Louise Rhodes) voice, one of my favourite singer (the others are: Jomi Mitchell,
    Elizabeth Frazier, Tracey Thorn and last but no least Shara "Unfinished Sympathy" Nelson).
     
  6. helder777

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    Very chill, I'm personally like explosive and awesomeness stuff you know? That thing when hits give you fuckin chills.

    But it's a very nice song to kinda sit relax and listen to it :)
     
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    Yeah Helder. Not bad at all i agree with thantrax.

    - I think the drop sounds too much monotone. For my taste, I add some other lead.
    - The stops at 1.10 and 1.25 maybe you can add FX like white noise or other, listen this track at 1.38 for example:

    http://soundcloud.com/parisblohm/paris-blohm-taylr-renee-left-behinds-out-now

    Continues work and continues learning Helder! Good Job! :thumbsup:
     
  8. helder777

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    I didn't add anything more on the drop cause i thought there will be too much going on, but i will check this possibility.

    About the effect, it's really nice on this track that you posted, but i suck doing effects, really need to improve that.

    Thanks a lot for the feedback man! peace!
     
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    I liked, but I would switch a few synths. But I generally liked.
     
  10. helder777

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    Thanks for the feedback Famine, I appreciate it!!
     
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