I make a Offical Remix and I need your feadbeak about the mix&mastering.
http://soundcloud.com/ori-lizer/doran-madly-vayom-ori-remix
hare the link:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/fwf4ca
or tunescoop
http://www.tunescoop.com/play/333035323930/doran-madly-vayom-ori-remix-mp3
I need you to write me what to improve
Thank you very much!!!!
You help me a lot!

 

Theres a lot of material to study here, there are basic problems like a dead bass, some days a guy have the same problem that we make a list of advise....
Search and study

 

Think a good mix overall ,maybe the vocal could come down a little, and the bass a little bit more forward in the mix with a little less sub ,theyre the main things that stuck out to me. think the kick comes in a bit early in the breakdown as well.but rest sounds fine to me. Good main riff also.

 

Feadbeak!
Sorry, it's late and I'm bored/tired. Keep it up!
Try digging out some 500-ish in the mix for the vocals to sit in. Turn down the annoying "whoa!" sample.

 

Mix sounds pretty good to me. I agree with the lack of bass but that is not to hard to fix. Vocals might turn down just a little, But not that bad.

 

Thank you very much
I will try to fix it and reuplaod it
sorry about my english

 

use less reverb on the main synth line, use delay instead (1:30).