Early version but getting there



Don't come crawling.

I know there's something wrong when I tune in.
No fear but something strong that I can't bin.
It seems like you got lost in atrophy.
Heartfelt, there's something gone, but that's just me.

Don't come calling. Don't come bawling.
Don't come falling. Don't come crawling.

I feel there's something off when you get near.
No tears but something else that I don't fear.
It seems like someone's lost the edge on me.
Heartless, you're almost gone, relax and breathe.

Don't come calling. Don't come brawling.
Don't come fawning. Don't come balling.
Don't come crawling. Don't come clawing.
Don't come boring. Don't come crawling.

Don't come calling. Don't come brawling.
Don't come fawning. Don't come balling.
Don't come crawling. Don't come clawing.
Don't come boring. Don't come crawling.

 

Last edited: Dec 20, 2025 at 2:59 AM

That's a great one...love the lyrics and just the whole trip. The vocals are super easy to understand and the production value is better than it's ever been!

 

Made my day with that. Thank you so much

 

I´m trying to remember where i heard vocals like these, simplicity is hard but this is simple and interesting and i love the vocal effect!

 

Always sharing too early and, only having a free SC account, I'm addicted to the 18 plays I've had to swap out a new verse melody.



Don't come crawling. Don't come crawling.
Don't come crawling. Don't come crawling.

I know there's something wrong when I tune in.
No fear but something strong that I can't bin.
It seems like you got lost in atrophy.
Heartfelt, there's something gone, but that's just me.

Don't come calling. Don't come bawling.
Don't come fallen. Don't come crawling.

I feel there's something off when you get near.
No tears but something else that I don't fear.
It seems like someone's lost the edge of me.
Heartless, you're almost gone, relax and breathe.

Don't come calling. Don't come balling.
Don't come fawning. Don't come boring.
Don't come warning. Don't come clawing.
Don't come brawling. Don't come crawling.

Don't come calling. Don't come all in.
Don't come calling. Don't come boring.
Don't come crawling. Don't come crawling.
Don't come crawling. Don't come crawling.

 

Last edited: Dec 21, 2025 at 1:29 AM

Cool track, I would suggest to reduce the volume of the vocals. They could integrage a little better into the instrumental. And maybe give them a little bed of airy reverb? How is your singing? Is it an option to have a little of the og. vocals?

 

Thanks, already reduced the vocals, about 3 minutes after I posted lol Now uploaded.
No voice at all so it's vocoder or nothing at the moment.

 

Last edited: Dec 21, 2025 at 1:29 AM