new trance song... feedback would be mad

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  1. randomtask

    randomtask Ultrasonic

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    hey guys new song just made and feedback would awesome
    thanks people *yes* *yes* *yes* *yes* *yes* *yes* *yes* *yes* *yes* *yes*

    http://soundcloud.com/randomtazk/where-am-i
     
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  3. SillySausage

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    remove the s from http and the soundcloud player will show on your post

    nice track :wink:
     
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    thanks man :wink:
     
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    It feels like the drums are way off at 1:51. I like the build, but those drums need some work for sure.

    Song gets really good at about 3:16, I feel like that would be a better opening to the whole song that the current opening. First half feels a bit off compared to the bits after 3:16.

    At 4:38, the glitch sounds throws me off quite a lot. It's just not on beat.

    The melody throughout is really solid. Just some minor things with the transitions being off beat throw the song off.
     
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