Hey everyone, this is a new track, part of my song a week series. Thoughts on the mix? its not a mastered version so volume would be low, the claps are also a tad too loud i feel.

https://voca.ro/1akpK8Z4Rzhk

 

I think it sounds good overall. I like the percussion. If you want honesty, while it sounds good, I have an issue with the riff that repeats throughout. To me it has no depth, nothing to say, but there it is blaring in my face for two minutes. I find it quite irritating.

 

It could be improved; the basic idea is great, the instrumentation too, but it's still lacking a bit.
Maybe they should just add some vocals.

 

Yup i kind of want to do something about that riff as well. My thing is i am trying to make a viral pop song and i have noticed that a lot of them have some sound that sticks. I am actually using two elements here, the indian flute and that riff. Lets see how i goes! Will be sitting down on the lyrics today maybe the lyrics would, hopefully take the attention away from the main riff!

 

hey whatsup pulsewave. Yup going to sit on the lyric composition today, hope that switches it up a little bit. Fair warning, it is going to be a bilingual song!