Can you guys review my song

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  1. mrpsanter

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    Please let me know what you think of this one:
     
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  3. PulseWave

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    Hello @mrpsanter, first of all congratulations on your new work!

    The drums and the Solo guitar could be a bit louder.
    The song is otherwise very interesting and exciting to listen to. The lead guitar has a nice stereo field.
     
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    @mrpsanter luv me a bit of wurli ! Nice jazzy chords and vibe. Cool little vocal drop. The lead guitar good does sound good but a little far back at times during the track imho. Nice work though ! Enjoyed listening :cheers:
     
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    Good work! Like the vibe a lot!. I think you can make it a lot more cohesive just by lowering the volume of the chords (so the guitar and the drums will be at par) and then parallel glue compress/saturate everthing to taste before the limiter. :boombox:

    Cheers!
     
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    Nice work!
    I'd give some stereo field to the drums and that wah-wah guitar. I think the master needs some compression.
     
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    Thanks for your kind words.
    I actually thought that the guitar was too loud and dominant and I intentionally smooth it down. Guess I was wrong maybe.
     
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    It's cool but it seems linked to an old time.

    @mrpsanter Blaxploitation soundtrack stuff.
     
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  10. mrpsanter

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    Hi, what do you mean exactly?
     
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    Thanks, I will take that as a compliment.
     
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    I think @capitan crunch meant it sounds as if it was taken from old movies ost's, and I think that's right, it takes me back to old 60's and 70's movies' music. And there's nothing wrong with that. I think you did a great job. Keep on it!:wink:
     
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    you can find some great films on rutracker. your track seems inspired by that music
     
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    Indeed I wanted to get that 70s vibe:
    Looking like I nailed it at least partly.
     
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    Hey hey, very interesting.

    The off-beat thing, is it intentional?
     
  16. mrpsanter

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    At first, not really but afterwards I decided to leave it as it is
     
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