Feedback VERY welcome, especially when it comes to the technical aspects...

 

Last edited: Aug 8, 2025

On your first track I hear a distinct lack of dynamic range control (not necessarily compression), specially your reverby synth in the middle of the track and your vocal sample. Not saying It's a bad thing, but could be a limiting factor depending on where you plan your track to be heard.

I feel your midrange in general lacks some density, some low mids saturation.
I don't feel too comfortable commenting on your arrangement since that can be very personal, but I will try.

Your vocal sample and keys on your second track are very distracting. They are out of time and are noticeably louder than the rest of your mix. They don't sound integrated or very coherent at all.

I hope It doesn't come across as too harsh, It's just my honest opinion.

 

No no, many thanks for your helpful critique. I will definitely take that into consideration when i work on the track! Thanks for your time!