http://soundcloud.com/boylearnsarcane/05212014_6a/s-N4fkn

I am stuck with this track were it is and any critique or advice would be helpful to me.

 

I just fixed it so you guys can listen to it... sorry about that.

 

Awesome track! Had me from the moment that arp came in.

Only thing at all I would change is in one lil section from about 2:38 to about 2:57,
there's a couple spots that are kinda minimal,where it needs one more sound goin on,
just one more lil sound or melody to fill the space & keep the brain busy in those lil brief moments.

Other than that pretty close to perfect in my opinion.I literally can't criticize it
For being almost 8 mins long,I was pretty entertained.

At about 5:16 when it came in at half time I about lost my mind :dancing:

Great work!

 

Thanks! And I agree that there needs to be something else from about 2:38 to about 2:57 to spice things up!