A work in progress

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by boylearnsarcane, Jun 21, 2014.

  1. boylearnsarcane

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    I just fixed it so you guys can listen to it... sorry about that.
     
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    Awesome track! Had me from the moment that arp came in.

    Only thing at all I would change is in one lil section from about 2:38 to about 2:57,
    there's a couple spots that are kinda minimal,where it needs one more sound goin on,
    just one more lil sound or melody to fill the space & keep the brain busy in those lil brief moments.

    Other than that pretty close to perfect in my opinion.I literally can't criticize it
    For being almost 8 mins long,I was pretty entertained.

    At about 5:16 when it came in at half time I about lost my mind :dancing:

    Great work! :thumbsup:

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    Thanks! And I agree that there needs to be something else from about 2:38 to about 2:57 to spice things up!
     
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