Here's my go at it...
I tried vocoloid for the vox.

 

wow thats nice @capitan crunch i wish i had more to say but it just works. your mastering also got better, like its noticeably louder and richer than anything youve entered so far and overall clear, i definitely see growth on that side

yeah idk what else to say, its just nice to listen too; the instrumental specifically is well done, theres not a single thing that stands out or makes the piece imo, everything together as a whole makes it. nice job capitan

 

thx I'm happy you guys like it.

 

I don't like it...I love it!! I don't have the juice today, but I'll let you know why in a coupla days my heartfelt review.

 

Hey thanks a lot
Love how you described it the abyss beneath gave me chills. That tension between balance and chaos is exactly what I was aiming for.
Maybe he’s still falling... maybe he hit the ground and got back up glitching
Glad it spoke to you!

 

@macros mk2
Wow, that intro literally suspended me in zero gravity… and that little motif around 1:30 just nailed me. There’s a real sense of storytelling in your music. I love this clock sound accelerated.

 

Definitely, and thank you.