Tell me what you think. If anyone can sing, let's collab.

http://soundcloud.com/aggressivelypassive/aimless-logic

Left a lot of open space for this one, to try and get someone to sing or rap in it.

 

I like the choice of instruments and the melody, just the mixing could really be improved in my opinion. It sounds like you're pushing everything in the red and your limiter is smashing everything together, you might wanna reduce the volume of all your instruments so the limiter kicks in a little less. Really enjoy the break with the acoustic drums, good stuff. Also you might wanna EQ that bassy synth to give you some headroom for your kick
Hope this is helpful !