Posting here to see what ya guys think of this song I made a couple months back : def needs some work but any suggestions would help a lot.

 

too much widening on the synths / the overall mix. there is not enough center punch and body, lacking impact.

The main choppy, trance gate synth that comes in at the drop is too loud.

Bass needs to be a bit louder, or perhaps a bit more harmonically rich, with saturation etc.

Drums need to come up. I can barely hear them against the synths. Hi hat is almost drowned out completely in some parts. Clap could use layering and more energy in the hi's. With the main synths pulled down, the drums will pop through a bit more, but i still think they can come up a few db.

More automation throughout. Automate everything. Random reverb and delay throws throughout, sending different parts of the song every 4 or 8 bars. Main choppy trance gate synth and its response synth, the sort of fog horn synth stab thing could both benefit from LPF or HPF automation + washout automation.

Longer outro.