Hey guys This is my first time posting one of my tracks on here and thats a big deal for me cause I usually don't feel that my music is up to par to share! I'm finally getting a grasp of all the production techniques I've been learning and I'd love to hear some of you're feedback on my newest track.

Let me know what you guys think and if there is anything that you would fix or change.

Keep in mind the track is unmastered, but was produced and mixed by myself

The track is private so it's coming up as 'not available' when I embed it. Is there anyways around that? without making it public of course haha

https://soundcloud.com/pjayofficial/phoenix-original-mix/s-11QQ9

 

Anybody?

 

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. If you like the song, follow me on facebook/soundcloud

http://soundcloud.com/pjayofficial/phoenix-original-mixfree-download

 

Very nice melody, but I feel like the initial instrument (the arpeggiated pluck) is a little bit too loud compared to the rest. It drowns out the other instruments at parts.

The percussion is really good. Like how you variate it quite a bit throughout the song.