[F4F] Summer Chill Deep House - Need your Listening and feedback!

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by mikemikeass, Jun 9, 2014.

  1. mikemikeass

    mikemikeass Noisemaker

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    Hi It's getting hot out there so I try to compose a deep house with chill atmosphere. Adding some vocal into the song and hope it can make it more soulful. I hope the beat and rhythm is energetic enough to make you move. Please give me some feedback since I'm still a beginner of music production. Leave your link so I can return feedbacks to you as well! Follow my sound cloud and I would follow you too, I love making music buddies. :thumbsup:

    http://soundcloud.com/mikemikeass/summer-chill-deep-house
     
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  3. PatrickKn

    PatrickKn Member

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    Really liked listening to this. I feel like that arpeggiated bass line could come out a bit more volume wise, because I liked that riff a lot but it felt a bit drowned out at some parts (especially towards the last half). Good song though man.
     
  4. mikemikeass

    mikemikeass Noisemaker

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    Thanks so much, I was trying to bring out the other parts so I lowered the vol of the bass. Maybe I shouldn't do so since bass is the main thing for deep house. Thanks for your advise, means a lot to me.
     
  5. manducator

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    Great song but it sounds really muffled. This needs good mixing and mastering.

    But the skills for song writing are there!
     
  6. mikemikeass

    mikemikeass Noisemaker

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    seems cutting high is a mistake :snuffy:
     
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