Tell me what you guys think. Any tips appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/aggressivelypassive/sound-check

 

Oh lawd, sweet infant baby jesus in a bib eating spinach gerber baby food! Where is the damn kick dude!!!? Lol Very cool piano melody and backing pluck synth but the kick is like a blind man at eye exam. Cmon son.

 

You're like the 10th person to say that, haha. My ears must be really sensitive to bass, and really insensitive to treble. I gotta go back to all my tracks and increase the kick, as the major thing people say about my tracks is that there is not enough of a kick presence.

Thanks for the listen sir. Think I'll go back to the kick later tonight.

 

Hey man I use to have the same problem. I use to just really like to hear the melody over everything else. But then a friend played one of my tracks at a club and a few people left it was so bad smh. Ya live and a learn man.

 

what are you using for speakers Patrick? Cause I agree, the kick drum is pretty much non existent on my monitors haha.

It has a nice vibe.. I feel that it's lacking a main melody though. The piano is cool and provides a great bottom layer but it needs another seperate, catchy melody that you can whistle to that will get stuck in your head.

Overall though, very nice job