Our new song "Real Talk" is here
—hope you enjoy listening!

Have a great day
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The idea is good.

Just don't destroy the vocals with compression and have more dynamics in the synth section and partly more in the piano parts because it often get's extremely clouded and then it also sounds good.

 

Noted !

 

That's what happens when you try to pack too many ideas into one track without quite having the skills to make it perfectly clean. But "cloudy" is an adjective I actually like—I prefer it over "clean," for sure! Thanks for your constructive feedback!

 

That's great, thanks for sharing.

 

Thank you Semarus !
Be sure to check the other tracks as well
altarus :

and
waterfall :

Both homemade from France

 

Both homemade from France

Good vocals, nice voice. I'd like to hear more bottom end, and have the vocal come through a little more.
Altarus: make a radio edit; 3:30 - 3:50 in length. I would lose the "Je Survivai" sounding like intro for the single.
I think Altarus would be a good lead single.
I would use your "French card" and submit it to Ici Radio-Canada Première.
Consider a French vocal for this action.

I think you have something here. Go for it.

 

Last edited: Nov 8, 2024 at 8:27 PM

Thanks for you Interest Lemonhead !
That's a quite a lot of changes to make ;) I think we'll take a rain check this time ! ;)