Could you please elaborate? This seems like good advice but i dont quite understand

 

Blessed

my intuition's starting to ferment
and when it fails it hurts so bad
oh it hurts so bad
blessed
i'm at the mercy of your compliments
and when they cease it hurts so bad
oh it hurts so bad
blessed
this mess is blessed​

 

I'm still making my mind up about it.

 

You don't need to learn any principle. Have fun.

 

Of course, I was joking with you.

Many people may like your music style. Maybe the reason is that these people have been listening to these songs since childhood and have memories of that time, and when they listen to your song now, that time is evoked in their minds and they enjoy remembering it. Maybe one of the reasons for this is that nowadays, less music of this style is made, so that it is somehow attractive to your listeners. I mean that the lack of something makes that thing attractive.
But there is a fundamental problem in your songs that your musical instruments, especially the guitar, have no personality and are somehow used only to fill the space. Someone is shouting in the middle, and the instrument has to sacrifice itself and get involved in the sound disturbances so that the singer doesn't feel alone.
In my opinion, this style of music does not express anything special and is mostly used to attract young people who are looking for protests against social systems. Of course, I don't want to say what style of music is good and what style is not. I pay attention to the way audio tools are used with all the sound effects and I really can't accept this model of loud voices without a purpose in music. Maybe I'm wrong too, but what is the need to make the sounds so disturbing and make ear-splitting spaces? Why don't you believe in the correct and logical use of anything?

 

i have no proper knowledge bout classic genres song structure like intro ,verse ,chorus,bridge and so on .
imho its feels bit thrown together , but after listening again and again structure seems fine but part1 dont interact good with part 2,part 2 to 3 is so ok'ish nothin bangin ,part3 to 4 lets call it drop is great,drop to part 1 vice versa to the intro sounds good etc.
and whats in imh and not important opinion is fckn things up is your voice flow ...its like :
da.da..dadataa..da.da..dadataa..da.da..dadataa....just because its on beat it dont be good automatcly

this just what i think what i want to listen as listener ...but in the end just give flying fck bout my comment and just keep up and have fun ,im curious what you will post in a year ...

and of course ignore ulx....he is bla bla
i was acting out of hearing almost what i like u kno
my english sucks sry

 

you learned on a bbc docu or what .... feckn clueless you are...change ulx to
word sleeve pls...lol even the political term is choosen wrong

i could write little esay on oi/punk ,merika/eu,music taste,ppl and different mindsets on the hegemons and pupils life in that topic ,the before and the after ,but you proofed that you not interested in actual conversation .

 

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I am not against any style of music. I just say that everything should be used correctly. It wants to be a voice or a musical instrument or anything else. Musical instruments have been designed and built to play and make the listener feel good, not for sound effects. All these good sounds and feelings can be created with the guitar, but it is not used for this purpose and is used to create audio noises. One should ask what positive effect these noises have on the soul and mind of the listener and what exactly they cause. Is it other than that the listener's blood pressure increases and he suffers mental illnesses?

 

I dig it. Yeah I could sit here and analyze it and pick it apart and complain, but it's definitely not horrible. Could it be refined a bit? sure.
But how much of that before it loses it's ummph? wouldn't hurt to make a few adjustments here and there but don't get religious with it.

It's fine as is. I enjoyed it. keep going.