Feedback Please

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by gumhoof, Aug 21, 2024 at 9:03 PM.

  1. gumhoof

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    I'm sorry you think there is failure in making music somehow. The act of creating it is the reward. I see nor feel any kind of failure if I get to spend my limited time here doing something as awesome as creating music. All this despite the rules and principles others may need. I am not trying to get any outside reward or praise or fame, or anything external. It is purely intrinsic in its value to me. I cannot fail because it is not a game, its just what I do. Nothing else matters when i do it. Those gifts, ULX, are hard to come by in this life.
     
  2. gumhoof

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    Thank you for listening. Have a blessed journey.
     
  3. Crinklebumps

    Crinklebumps Audiosexual

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    I wonder if the guy who didn't know who Foster was is reading this thread, I hope so...
     
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  4. ULX

    ULX Ultrasonic

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    I wish it was a game. Making music is like war. War requires tools, fighting techniques, strategy, intelligent command, elite combat forces, support and supplies, coordination in attacks, calculated advances and many other things. Making music is like this. Without the mentioned items, making music will not lead to the desired result and will bring many risks for the fighter or player.:shalom:
     
  5. Smeghead

    Smeghead Producer

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    The ignore button is your friend
     
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  6. gumhoof

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    This song means alot to me and I want to get it sounding like it was done in a studio and the right way ,
     
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  8. gumhoof

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    Doubts
    met a gal who was based
    i hadn't based for days
    'and i had my doubts
    cast out my doubts, a little hemorrhage in my bones and now it's on
    gal's eyes are dead, no one's alive with me, why?
    i'm sorry i'm...
    i'm worried i'm...
    no better than, no worse than you
    met a dude that spaced
    he couldn't face the days
    and he had his doubts
    passed on my doubts in a letter to myself and now it's gone
    guess i stayed the same, we never really change, why?
    i'm sorry i'm...
    i'm worried i'm...
    no better than, no worse than you​
     
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  9. gumhoof

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    Free, I am not yours
    Slave to you no more
    What will you do?
    What will you do now when it all comes down?
    You're never gonna get enough
    I'd blame you
    You are a whore
    I believe from my heart
    I am not yours
    A little patience wouldnt kill you
    I do tell you
    This is how it's gonna go
    you want the pie, you get no pie
     

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  10. Crinklebumps

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    I feel the natural place for this kind of music is played live by a band. Are you in a band?
     
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  12. gumhoof

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    I am in a band and this track was part of a whole album, which was done some years ago.
     
  13. Smeghead

    Smeghead Producer

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    This is solid stoner/doom riffing in my book! I know a lot of that stuff is pretty lofi-diy sounding but imho it needs a little more producing. Doubletrack the guitars and turn up the riffs!
     
  14. Smeghead

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    "You want the pie, you get no pie"

    Brutal :phunk:
     
  15. SacyGuy

    SacyGuy Kapellmeister

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    great, man. I liked. Keep goin'
     
  16. gumhoof

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    licking the floors again
    painting the doors and them
    i know the coolest group
    bart slime was my hero
    now he is a zero
    tommy drool was cool
    jordan kill was sinful
    wave bye to the drugs
    say hi to the slugs
    sleeping on the rug
    swallowing the bugs
    stuck in your unchewed gum
    feel this, my lump
    im slid under the carpet
    i can hear your teeth rotting
     
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  17. WolwerineBlues

    WolwerineBlues Platinum Record

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    Cool i love it, keep it up! punk forever. A:guru:
     
  18. murilandre

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    monkeys are cool animals dont you think?
     
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  19. gumhoof

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    Honestly thats my own voice, its not melodyne. We dont own melodyne
     
  20. Auen Fred

    Auen Fred Producer

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    im not a fan of following always and 100% arrangement rules , but maybe do it a bit more .
    your tracks sound really not far away to be bangin .
     
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