Remixed a trance track into something a bit more adventurous. Feedback always welcome. Enjoy!

 

Thanks!

 

Just in case you didn't realize in the meantime, I think you meant to reply in another thread...

 

Currently, creators only want to receive positive feedback, and if someone issues negative feedback, the creators can sue the issuer and make him/her pay a fine. I'm afraid to comment because I might end up in jail.

 

Your posts are fun, I want to hear the criticism. I won't sue you, I promise.

 

I say to anyone who should take a more serious view of music, unfortunately I am doomed to revenge. Taking a serious look at music is not one of the things that people do. These things are more like playing with computer software than taking a serious look at music.
Unfortunately, artificial intelligence developers do not take music seriously too. Taking a serious look at music comes from studying and examining the works of great composers. Without considering this fact and trying to play music software will not have a positive result for the artist.
You should start and put great works in front of you and see what these people did in their works and learn from them. Of course, I give you the right too. In the internet of this size and breadth, no one teaches people the right way to learn music. No matter how much you spend and buy educational videos, you cannot become a great composer. Because becoming a great composer requires individual thinking. You have to put the works in front of you and start analyzing them. See what techniques and methods are used in different parts of the work. And at least use these for every part of your music. So you have to work on a deep understanding of music so that this deep understanding becomes a part of your being.
I don't say anything unreal. You can see now that your recent work was not well received here. Well, there is a big reason for this, and that is that you did not use many findings of great works in your work. If you continue with the current process and ignore the things I said, your works will not be well received.
Download the music books today and start learning the things you were unaware of until now. Continue your learning because learning music is a long process and you should master all the principles of music from the smallest things to the most profound things as much as you can. Then you can wait for more listeners to come to you.

 

I appreciate you taking the time to write this, but what is that great music you keep referring to in your posts?
Here is a compiled list of great acousmatic works - https://ubu.com/sound/electronic.html, there is also the Warp (label) back catalogue, and Dua Lipa's Future Nostalgia, all of which I would consider to be great music in some respects, yet quite different.

I don't mind criticism, especially when it's constructive, but there seems to be a vagueness to most of your comments - often focusing on some kind of essence which isn't clearly defined, instead of specifying a reference point and perceived intention against which you find the execution lacking.

 

Nice track, different from the rest

 

thanks, appreciate it