Hello folks,

That is a remake I made from an old song of mine and one of my collabs. It is kind of dream pop, trip-hop, indietronica, post rockish... Well, just released it and hope you enjoy.

and in case you missed, I also remastered an old 90´s style rock grunge collab:

You can download both for free at my bandcamp:

 

Do you want comments?

 

Constructive insights are always welcome!

 

No worries, I just have a technical comment to make - nothing against your artistry. Your vocal is very difficult to hear. I had to put headphones on to make out any of it. It needs to come up by more than a decibel or two.

 

Thanks for taking your time to listen and comment! I usually make some changes after my initial releases, and then repost them with the changes at my bandcamp. I will really take your comment into consideration for upcoming fixes, because I know I struggle (a lot) with my vocals and tend to keep them too low.
Thanks once again!

 

I like it! Regarding the She slips away mix, give this a try and see if you like it:
bass and main synth: -3dB (pad/string synth is ok)
snare: -2db
vocals: +3db

 

Thanks for the feedback! Noting down the suggestions!

 

Updated the bandcamp version with most of the above suggestions. Thanks @krameri @soundog for the helpful insights and feedback (as always around here)!!!!

 

I meant to also say that I wish you the best of luck with it!

 

To be 100% honest and frank, the male voice of the first song needs serious adjusting / training, it's out of tune most of the time.
But overall, your sound is great, like this particular mix of Pop and Rock.

The female singer (you ?), on the second song "Rejection" is absolutely great and fine, just love it! <3 Nice Grunge composition / remix!

 

The female singer in the grunge one is a friend/collab (and yeah, she really sings and has a beautiful, stunning voice!!! - which is not my case (the male one lol)).

Thanks for the feedback!

 

Last edited: Jun 15, 2024