HI! This is my latest song. What do you think? Leave a comment on YouTube? Thank you

Per un solo attimo d'amore ancora

 

It sucks balls.

 

poor dear, what's your problem?

 

You wanted an opinion.

 

Nice! Just had a look at your channel and you've captured that 70's Italian soundtrack vibe really well!

I can tell certain instruments are vst's and id maybe not worry about the vinyl aging. Still, you got a sub because I love this genre. Big fan of Morricone, Frizzi, Cipriani etc

 

I liked it. Nice soundtrack composition and fits the style of an old movie. But it could be improved (imho):

- the special effects did it no good (vinyl and telephone noise and the woman"s laughing)
- yes, the instruments sound a bit too midi, a bit too artificial - maybe it is on purpose to sound more lo-fi 80ies (like a track totally made with an old midi keyboard)
- the transition to a faster/different vibe near the end could be improved also (but do not know exactly how)

Hope that helps!

 

Last edited: Feb 4, 2024

i liked it mate, maybe as the guy above me said the change towards the end is maybe a bit abrupt? i enjoyed that last part
bella cmq, un saluto

 

Two...nay three, thumbs up from me !

 

I feel I need to apologise for my appraisal. I was trying to emphasise the similarity between coldly asking for feedback (actually you were asking for YouTube traffic) and the effort exchange.

 

Last edited: Feb 5, 2024

There's things going on compositionally that I like. I'd like to be diplomatic and say I personally would have approached the actual realization differently, but I don't think it's fair at all to say the track has no merit. If I thought it just flat "sucked balls" I'd ignore it and not comment. The vibe is nice!

(I did notice that the guitar-ish synth on the right is really flat. Makes it hard to listen to, for me.)

 

Nice melody and your song is benign enough not to call attention away from rolling credits, but the tie has to go on the fellow in the poster.