Feedback for a 80´s influenced Pop Song

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  1. BenniTheBlockbuster

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    hello , I have produced a pop song .
    Actually I'm more active in the Hip Hop area but somehow I was interested in doing it.
    I wanted to do something inspired by the kid laroi or Justin Bieber .
    Modern pop music with an 80s influence.

    The beat is completely mine, the voice comes from a sample pack from Vandalism because I can't sing at all myself.
    I built and mixed the track in Studio One and I'm even thinking about releasing the track on Spotify.

    What do you think about the song and the mix ?

    https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/9cxs...Wild.wav?rlkey=x0a97uocwawu52kbcmlckqxeu&dl=0
     
    BenniTheBlockbuster, Nov 8, 2023
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  3. No Avenger

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    Mix:
    - some sounds are too wide and too out of phase (hint, switch to mono),
    - kick's too kicky, IMHO,
    - transition to new beat at 1:37 not good,
    - toms in mono??? :sad: [​IMG]

    Song is ok.
     
    No Avenger, Nov 8, 2023
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