Hello folks, i'm kinda newbie around. Mixing songs for fun on my spare time for a bit. Unfortunately nobody around to ask opinion or different perspective. Would you help me to clarify what are the ye-yes and no-nos in this particular mix to guide me for further.

i uploaded it to random audio sharing site;

https://vocaroo.com/1a3GusVt2CFY

to be clear it is loud! because loud = better somehow!? (that was the first thing i've ever learnt)

it's taken from online 3rd party audio database, so i'm not responsible for recording any of tracks. Not a single credit, just enthusiastic me!

Thanks anyway! I guess I'll be stick around for a while.