Hi, If you may, Listen for a few intolerable moments, and share your priceless take, or bash my fragile ego, so i can improve my focus on said area. Thanks!

I'll be back in a few months to gather your notes or fingers, when my shattered ego is stitched back toigoither. :p no bars held please.

 

you have a low-fi ambience degraded tape thing going on in the first track, and i think it is overbearing. It's not present in the second track, so it's obviously on purpose. I would prefer the first track more than the second, if it was cleaner; similar the second. The second track is more musically abstract, but it's easier to listen to without the fog of lo-fi. just some first listen thought.

 

I don't understand what's going on or what is this supposed to sound like. But my ears are not bleeding from screeching highs so that's good for a change.

My veredict: .̸̯̥̇͌͘.̴͇͍̼̳̔̈́͛.̸͇̝̂́̌͘.̴̛̲̜͎̼.̶̙̉̇ /10

 

Thank you, that's very helpful actually. In the little sub stages I take between breaks and coming back to something, It may be helpful to have some check lists/reference tracks to go back to maybe so im not over doing effects or sounds that its overbearing. I get kinda infatuated with certain sounds,with disregard to how it may fatigue or become kind of annoying after the initial x:xx seconds or minutes.

Honestly I don't know either haha, but thanks for the input. I think it is my subconscious and psyche state, nostalgia, or maybe just an ambient sort of image of whatever i've been reading lately typically.

 

It's ail good. We're not all trying to sound like Simon and Garfunkel! Keep writing what you like, it's working.